Wow, yes, that's heaps better! You've got a good hand for shine (on the hair and skirt-leaves for example) and the butterfly wings look like a stained glass window which gives a lovely double-entendre effect.
How much time passed between drawing the first and the second?
nice! you use a lot more shading now and the proportions have improved as well ^^ and did you change from using colored pencils to using a tablet? :3 a lot of improvements!
How much time passed between drawing the first and the second?